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June 17th, 2013, 1:15 pm

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Reply SketchJelly, June 17th, 2013, 1:21 pm

so this is what this chapter will look like, i hope you don't mind, and if you do, honestly, then i don't really care cus i like it 8)
Also, i skipped the part when they meet, because it isn't important to the plot, but well, Sascha and his father went to the US, as a graduation present for sascha, to see the building mr m worked in (that sascha now works at) and he met mr m coincidentally, and showed him his notes, and let's just say that if sascha had lived in new york at the time, he would have been offered a job, but instead mr m invited him and his dad to come see them do an experiment that they were going to conduct the next day, which is where the chapter/flashback starts.
just if you you were interested in knowing how it came to this haha.

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Reply SketchJelly, May 28th, 2019, 9:50 am

@Merrsharr: HAH AWESOME!! thank you for noticing ;O;

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Reply ranasan, June 19th, 2013, 12:45 am

Being invited to watch an experiment in a flashback? Uh-Oh...

Reply Oly-RRR, August 27th, 2014, 5:06 am

I like the limited palette! Also this just SMELLS like the beginning of Half-Life except possibly without alien invasion...

Reply Merrsharr, April 17th, 2019, 1:46 pm

Noone in the comments picked up on him mentioning Dark?
Well, 6 years later someone noticed.

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