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August 25th, 2014, 3:05 pm

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Reply SketchJelly, August 25th, 2014, 3:14 pm

i thought it would be okay to take a slightly different coloring approach to this page since its kind of an intermission haha, hope you dont mind!
the pages will look like they usually do next week-
oh on that note i just started school again so i need to get into a regular rythm again, but i'll try my best not to miss any updates! (no i did not get a buffer done smh)

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Reply SketchJelly, August 27th, 2014, 10:23 am

@Oly-RRR: tbh i think you migth not be, i read all (i assume but am not sure oh my god there were so many) comments and i appreciate your honesty even tho a lot of this comic is so old that the critique is kinda wasted because i'd know not to do things like that anymore haha, i feel like we generally have a lot of different opinions on things?? which is ok and makes for more diversity and i get that you're like a diehard science fiction fan and i like it too but i kinda stop at "ok this makes sense in some weird so its good enough for me" though i have known for a long long while that im not really smart enough or maybe educated enough to write this story to its full potential, at least i wasnt when i begun, if i had started it now i would have done better research for a lot of things, but thats not how it panned out and this is my first comic and well i really wanna see it to the end, just gotta role with it, i only have what my 16 year old self provided and at some points its really lacking TBQH!! and i sometimes wanna punch myself in the face like "surprise theres a scientist called gabriel maine he wasnt mentioned earlier but he's super important lol" stuff like that. but yeah even though i dont agree with all the stuff you wrote i still appreciate it, you dont have to continue reading im sure you'll come to hate the story even more if you do 8') or maybe you wont! who knows, some things you questioned are yet to be explained, i dont know if it would be to your science-satisfaction hahaha! do what you feel like doing, its all good! and also thank you regarding the art thing!

Reply SketchJelly, August 27th, 2014, 10:56 am

@Oly-RRR: oh i used hate in a very loose way here, i didnt mean it like that!! also i dont know if its about writing people, but it probably is about judging people in a social context yes.. and dont worry ya really gotta be an ass for me to not be polite and you arent one so its all cool B) also sorry i assumed you were a hardcore science fiction fan, it seemed that way, my mistake! but either way, some things just arent for some people and thats AllRight, we'll just keep doing our own things and hopefully we'll learn and grow from it 8) (i also like reading comments on my stuff because i am vain so no worries)

Reply SketchJelly, September 5th, 2014, 3:10 pm

@Rian': thank you! i actually do like this a lot but i think i'll stick to the other style still or make a slow transition like it was earlier as well haha, i dont like changing style just like that for some reason(i dont mind other people doing it its nice to see what people are capable of style wise idk whats up with me smh)

also thank you these first 2 weeks have been great so far! 8))

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Reply Oly-RRR, August 27th, 2014, 9:05 am

The art got so much better, good work! The story troubles me to the point that I start wondering that I might just not be the right reader for you.

Reply Oly-RRR, August 27th, 2014, 10:41 am

@SketchJelly: I don't hate your story, I just don't like it. And I'm not a hardcore science fiction fan, the only remotely sci-fi series I follow these days is Doctor Who. But I suspect we disagree on how to write people and on how to judge (or not to judge) people and that's what lies in the core of writing fiction, so you know, what's the point if neither of us gets any enjoyment out of it? I appreciate you being polite here, I probably wouldn't bother you with my commentary if I realised this was not my kind of story sooner. :]

Reply Oly-RRR, August 27th, 2014, 11:09 am

@SketchJelly: Ah, no worries! And yes, I've seen people give up on their early projects (like I did) and I've seen people continuing drawing them and turning them into something brilliant so I don't think there is one right way to do it, we all just gotta keep trying to do our best each in our own ways!

Reply Rian', August 30th, 2014, 4:12 pm

@SketchJelly: The colors look great that way in my opinion! I like the sort of "brushy" feeling... actually if that's something you enjoy I don't think you should restrain yourself from doing it even in non intermission pages... but then I'm not a good example of style consistency so hey x)

Good luck with school! Hope you learn a great deal and do lots of interesting projects this new schoolyear, you already improved so much since!

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